My hometown is Hunan. It’s a very beautiful province. The sky is blue. The air is fresh. The buildings are tall.In my hometown, there are four seasons, spring, summer, fall and winter.
Spring is my favourite season. In spring, the grass is very green and there are many colourful flowers. The weather is warm in srping. I can plant trees on Tree-Planting Day.
I like summer, too. Because my birthday is in summer. It is very hot in summer, and the days are long. I can swim in the lake. I can wear my beautiful dress in summer.
Fall is golden and the leaves are yellow. It is always windy and cool. I can wear my new shirt. I can fly a kite in the park.
Winter is very cold. Sometimes it snows in Hunan. Snow is very beautiful. I can make a snowman. I can play in the snow.
I love the four seasons. I can find many things to do and I have a lot of fun.
点评:本文是一篇写季节的文章。作者清楚的写出四个季节的特色,以及不同的天气,可以做的事情。同时值得赞赏的是,作者用词非常优美,词汇量也很丰富。